So I'm working on something, and I honestly don't have time for color, I've seen some black&white on Alterna titles so how about this? does this look good? look at the first image, it's a little darker, notice that the speech bubbles are pure white and everything else is a little darker than that, witch one looks better up or down?
also, does this dialog sound right? I'm trying to get better at writing. thanks anyone who leaves some critiques 😉!
Definitely like this and the bnw works well with it
Personally, I like the second image way better. As far as the dialog, I think the only thing that is off putting is the very last bubble, in which I think the main baddie is trying to insult the guy's impatience. I think "tripping on a rock" does not link very well to that. So, basically, insult his impatience directly.